Blog Entrytruth thursday: my body is holding back...May 30, '08 7:36 AM
for everyone



i.
he's unravelling. fingers extended, palms pressed, arms raised. slowly pieces fall. they crumble. unravelling, pieces fall and with all his might he tries to go on. there's water on his ankles. it's falling like water.

ii.
silly boy. he knows the person that speaks life. he's heard it. he's seen it. he's experienced it. he knows his fingers are no match for those fingers, the same ones that wrote on the ground. those palms that took the weight of the world. those open, open arms.

boy, why do you dare hold back?

iii.
forgetfulness. disobedience. we are fools aren't we all?

iv.
his arms are raised up, ready to touch the sky.





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nuriendil wrote on May 30
Beautiful, doosy.:)
thehumancomet wrote on May 30
brilliant and poetic and straight the to the point. good one, champ!
deathbycoke wrote on May 30
love it.
sh3ryna wrote on May 30
nakakainis ka deus. gusto ko rin kumuha nang ganyang mga pictures! ba't ang gaaganda lagi... grrrrrr..
amadeusss wrote on May 30, edited on May 31
haha... it's a really old photo... i can't even find the original copy of this anymore... /:
amadeusss wrote on May 30
thanks man!
aisubeki87 wrote on May 30
Finally! He-he.

I like it, like it. :)
taguan wrote on May 30
aww. doosie.
(the photo reminds me of Atlas and the weight of the world, for some reason... hehe)
driftrip wrote on May 30
mm there you go! if only they'd let us scribble poetry like this instead of the crazy mmda art.
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